When I Went Down the Rabbit Hole

By Chloe, age 11
When I Went Down the Rabbit Hole Hi! I am Chloe, and I am 11 years old. I enjoy writing sad stories or fiction. Some of my favorite books I have ever written were "Purple Flowers" and "Up Down and in Between" (Known to my Writopia friends as Soulmate), but I couldn’t submit them because they were too long. I enjoy singing, drawing, writing, fashion, and Troye Sivan. I have always loved writing but could never stick to my stories until I started Writopia. All my stories have something to do with a piece of me and I take pride in every one of them.

“As my blue dress flows in the wind,
my head feels like it’s in mid-spin.
I hear the rabbit!
‘Late, so late’”

Dedicated to:

Isabella for being the coolest writing buddy

Maddie  for ALWAYS commenting on my stories

Amanda S. for always knowing the coolest video to share

Amanda C. for all of your awesome help

Lena I have known you for only a few months but I feel like I have known you for a few years.

Emily S. for having the coolest quirkiest stories to share

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When I went down the rabbit hole,

I saw the sky come to a hold.

The echo of the Cheshire Cat

wearing the Mad Hatter’s hat.

As my blue dress flows in the wind,

my head feels like it’s in mid-spin.

I hear the rabbit!

“Late, so late.”

As he runs through a flying gate,

I duck with hands over my head

because I saw a flying bed.

“When will I get out of here?”

I scream and I scream with fear.

Until I hit into a wall

and on my back a baby crawls.

A glass shard that is oh so tall

reads the words

“Eat me.”

I climb on top a table top

and brace myself for the big hop

to land on top the mystery liquid,

and get ready for lots of sippin’.

I hear the noise of my own slurp,

and then I hear a birdy chirp.

It’s body was all big and fat,

and it pecks on the wall with a rat a tat tat.

When I went down the rabbit hole

I saw the sky come to a hold.

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